Sagheer Afzal

Two years ago; I was at a low ebb. I realised to my dismay that I had to go back to the drawing board and revise my entire approach to writing. After some searching I came across TLC. The report that I received from the reader told me exactly where I was going wrong and what I needed to do. I was more than happy to pay for excellent feedback and advice. The service provided by TLC is invaluable because it can give you an insight into the structural quality of your work. This is what stands TLC apart from other literary consultancies. From the Introduction

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